Endeavour's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hardon Potter Kazoo]

00:25

Before 00:25 I already laughed really hard.
But when you came at 00:25 I literally fell off my chair laughing.
After crying out laughing on the ground for 20 seconds I got back in my chair, writing this.

(pauses for another laugh XD)

yeh.. XD nice.
This was on the top 5 ? really deserved. =P

[The Picture (Trance Wip)]

whew

lol, D-Chain actually is a real life friend on mine xD
Hi there.

Anyway, in my opinion I do like the bass. But only at the start though.
Later in the song the pads do not fit the bass and vice versa.
You might want to lower the filter of the bass there so that you can only focus on the pads. I love the volume and the power of your percusion, that is something great. Yet another remark is how you filter the pads in.
Its not the good way. You should filter the pads in without the bass somehow.
Cause again, these two just don't fit together.

keep going man ^^,
you are progressing just fine with songs like this.
Endeavour

Absolix responds:

Thanks for the review Endeavour! I'll be sure to review some of your tunes as well :)

I do plan on swapping out the preset sounds (ex: bass/pads) with sounds that I made. Hopefully I can create sounds that dont collide as badly, because I agree, the bass sticks out like a sore thumb XD.

Thanks again
~patrick

[Rain Forest (SkyTrance RMX)]

Still love this

4.43 / 5.00 (+ 0.018)
Score Rank: #955
Popularity Rank: #60,945

Back to the high score my friend,
Back to the high rankz ^^

D-Chain responds:

perhaps..
im sorry to dissapoint.
the inspiration i need for this has been lost so..
maybe after a long time ill be submitting stuff like this once again.

[[SRG] Vanilla Sundae]

Rofl =P

I lol'd at the review below me xD.
The song sounds smooth man. Keep going, !

Endeavour

[Wander of Thought - F-777]

Whew

I have always admired your work Jesse.
I've already been active for 4 years on newgrounds constantly making music with many different accounts. You were always one of my inspiration sources.

Your songs are the most advanced and most versatile of all.
There is so much variation i can barely get a grip on it when listening. which is a good thing btw xD.

Something bothers me though.
Your songs always sound semi-professional. Not in sound, but in style.
You are moving so far away from the steriotype generic dance tracks that the real record companies etc do not recognize you as an artisan in making songs.

You might want to try to make a professional generic trance / dance track with great pads. (i LOVED the pads you used here).
May I humbly ask how you made the pads, or what presets you used for it ?

Again, I always love your work and I will always recognize a song made by you because of the astonishing and a-generic style.

Greetings,
Endeavour

[Hatchets and Heartaches]

Yay

Another song that deserves just the same review as the one i dropped at another song from you xD. This one just sounds a bit scarier though. Along with that video it even sounds creepy and disturbing. Quite well done. It works ^^

take care,
Endeavour

Cebster responds:

Well thanks! Yeah i can't say I have ever made anything quite like this. Hahah yeah that videos crazy! Well thanks for dropping me a review, I super appreciate it.

[The Friendship song]

0_O

Okay, I lol'd xD
Everything is offbeat and it sounds semi-professional,
But the song has something (entertaining) in it which is quite unique in a song.
It sounds so innocent yet sweet.

Just like Daedra I have don't have a slightest idea how I like this. But I find it awesome xD, very good job. 5/5 from me.

greets,
Endeavour

Cebster responds:

Haha yeah i was debating about uploading this. I realized I had to cause this is me, Crazy and offbeat! Haha I was never expecting top charts but I'm super happy people seem to get some sort of enjoyment of it. Well thanks for the thoughtful review, I really appreciate it.

[One Must Rise 2011]

Prachtig! Erg vet!

As one of the few good Dutch artists on newgrounds I admire you the most.
Your tracks just give that little extra that makes it a must for the ear !

Ga zo door, ze zijn geweldig ^^

Take care,
Endeavour

[/-Hard Trance-\]

Hey There

I find it very amazing =D.
Its progressive Hard Trance !
I noticed a couple of things that you could change to improve even more.
Straight from the beginning you let a sequence of pads play along with your melody. The problem is that you gave these pads EXACTLY the same notes as your main melody. The pads are too reeverbed for that. You should note these pads just like you would note a bass.
Giving a pad too much notes results in slight confusions by the listener =P.
I hope you understood me properly there.
Sorry for my bad english.

I also liked these small pitch changes troughout the song.
Yes you are promising indeed !.
The melodies are very nice and well supported.
We could expect great things from you on newgrouds in the near future ^^.

greetings,
Endeavour.

P.S would you like to vote and review my latest song (W.i.P).
It is called "End - Beyond Eternity".

thanks in advance.

Darkfire96 responds:

Lol sure. Ill see if i can do that. And yes i can see your new song. Ill be happy to.
I see what you mean by too many notes, so ill fix that and reupload soon. But im pretty busy so it will have to be in a week or two. Thanks for the review!
EDIT 1/25
I fixed the pads, as requested.
/-DJ Chaos-\

[Mau5mate - Rain Forests(OM)]

AT LAST =D

Your hard work hasn't been for nothing, just as I said, once you will break thru newgrounds. Good job man, this is it. With every song you will submit now your fame will multiply. And to be honest, this is one hell of a great track you made there.

Theres nothing bad to say about this song either, its perfect !.
Long, comfortable, enjoyable and a good variation.

This is it man =).

Greets,
Endeavour.

P.S it would be an honour to make a collab now xD

D-Chain responds:

yes... and to be honest, i didnt tought this would be IT.. the one breaking through NG.

i just woke up one day and it REALLY amazed me when i took a look at the responses, votes and listens...
it feels pretty damn good :D

PS: it would be my honour to collab with you mate.
ill hook you up on msn when im ready.