Endeavour's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[OMG: Preasent]

haha xD

Well, you dont even want to know how often i pressed the play button.
I thought it was a broken button at first until i figured i had to click on the present.

Not gonna "Repay" this =P

Good concept though, keep em coming.

VenturaTV responds:

The repay button actually ment see again I did it on perpose

["Bully"]

i lol'd

Its animated pretty cool, but sadly I had to use a magnifier to read it properly

[Line, Line, Line 2]

huh ?!

I agree with Figter,
What the hell was i watching xD.
Realy i can't come up with a proper definition.

I only saw some lines dancing a bit, but why ? i don't have a clue.
There was no single impression about the graphics nor draw style.
It were just a bunch of annoying childish scratches.

Im already for 2 years on newgrounds now, (not only this account)
And i must say that this is one of the worst flash submissions i have ever saw.
The music is completely out of bounds and doesnt add anything at all.
The movie was so unclear that i had to watch it again to figure out what the movie was representing. and i still don't realy know.

im sorry, but this is horrible,
if this was a serious attempt, then i feel sadness :).
do not try to submit this again, cause it will be a waste of our time.

Try to improve your drawing style, and make it more clear.
Also improve your graphics a littlebit, so that its nice to watch to.
Like an animated background or something.

Good luck. you'll need it.
Endeavour

3/10 0/5