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Good good !

Yes this is very good for your second song !.
Here are some points you should look after (kritiekpunten) :

1. You only got one diffrent sound in your melodies during the WHOLE song.
ya should add a 'trancy' version of the melody halfway the song to variate it a little.

2. The bass that you use in it is just not cool =P, you should also try to variate it.
like making a diffrent 'gate' in it, instead of one big note (in your piano roll), try 3 small ones. also, a bass sounds much cooler when you copy paste it an octave lower (one on C5 in piano roll and one on C4 in piano roll for example).
You could also support this with a pad, dont do it at start though, but also halfway the song to give your variation more power.

3. The song is to choppy. you should try to add your own style in it.
Ofcourse you are still a beginner, so you dont have an own style yet, but you could try to imagine something. (with your own style i mean : Add things you like and add things that are not very common in other songs. you should let us hear that you have made it. some kind of wierd clap or an own style of making percussion or something.

also you should try to make more effects in it. like a filter in it that goes in and hout, or some other wierd effect. like a reversed cymbal instead of normal ones.

Good luck, and when you don't get what im saying, ask it to me in dutch on msn ^^.

Grtz,
Endeavour.

P.S check my BassHunter song im working on xD

Mother Mariah 0_o

i LOVE these BEAUTIFUL synths in the beginning. those were 100% trance.
also the kick sounded a bit club house like. i like it !.

at 00.35 you changed a bit to an Arp =P. it was quite unexpected. you should announce it. further in the song i got dissappointed a bit. the song made me think it was working to some kind of climax, but it just remained the same, and made a good outro.

well nothing wrong with this song !!. one of ur better works for sure. ! the effects are magnificient !. and WOW 0_o the song got used for a GAME !!.
Amazing man !!! the bad side for u is that you can't delete the song now lol. you seem to do that often. (dont know why).

Well, GJ on this one mate.
Im now gonna listen to ur last song. i hope its even better than this one !!!.

Greets,
Endeavour.

Paperman12 responds:

Thanks, I gotta agree with you 100%.. Well I delete my tracks often cause I don't like to keep old crap up :P.. I kept these tracks for memories and just to have something up..

that bass is HUGE 0o

Holy shit.
That is the hardest kickbass i have ever heard =P.
(i mean after the second vocal break.) amazing xD.

Keep going Bounce ! =D.
Endeavour.

good !

Wow its very good, but it has a fair amount of clipping =(.
Every Crash FX comes a tad to late to my opinion.

Like Badshah said, the reverb to your percussion was amazing !.

Keep on tripping =),
Endeavour.

Very good !

Very nice Stash !.
I especially liked the the nice Bass/melody variation at 00.39.

For one of the first songs you have made this is a significantly good song !.
Keep it up man, and you will become very good =).

There were some things that were strange though.
Like the kick at the start.
If you used a free filter there, its better to start at 300 or higher.
Cause below 300 is fucked up. (wierd bass change).

Ask me on MSN if you don't understand something in this review,
ill explain it in dutch then =).

GJ,
grtz Endeavour aka St0rmChaser

My name's Endeavour. I love to make music, so that is what i do here ^^). When i review a Flash Submission, (which is very uncommon for me), I will give some powerfull but righteous criticm =) thats why i have dark aura. Happy listening mates =)

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